love

Undergo

At the depths of the ocean,
Your wistle contorts
You threw your gossamer net,
To cling upon the reeves of my existence
How they must cut your stronghold?
Under remain soft and supple,
To survive
In the fluidity of love

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5 thoughts on “Undergo

  1. The is perfect. It’s concise and powerful, like a coral bomb at the bottom of the reef. ‘In the fluidity of love’ is my favourite line…i think that could be your new slogan! Amazing, thank you for sharing!

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    • Thanks for seeing the value you in it. I’ve had it written for awhile but kept hesitating with posting it. I was afraid it was not enough but usually my poems are usually saturated with an upheaval of emotions and then bam gone.
      Hehe I think that is the Pisces‘ empowerment speaking out. Don’t wrestle in what or with who you love. Just accept it and take care of it. 😘

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      • I sometimes think the emotions dictate on the the length sometimes, giving weight and elasticity to a piece. This one works so well because it’s short and to the point. Packs the punch 🙂

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